I just wanted you so much
all at once,
I began to lose footing.
The gravity holding me down
was suddenly nonexistent,
I seemed to be floating,
yet also falling.
And it only seemed like a matter of time
before I finally hit the ground again;
and I prayed it’d be a
gentle landing.
That is nicely written. The transition and the flow was great.
Keep Writing. 🙂
Thank you! Yes I do plan to keep writing (:
You’re welcome. 😀
That’s great. 🙂
I need to get that writing-mojo back. 😦
You’ll find it. Keep looking!
Only if I knew where to look.